Well i really hate story tale narrated this way rewind time go back change perspective this make us hard to follow i hope there is not much more chapters like this one.
Change of perspective, if it was just du wei running and after he leave another chapter telling this story would be better about the dragon the magician emperor etc and even to the point where they found du wei so the next chapter would be on du wei perspective and would be much easier and would have a better flow on the story.
but there is somу (plenty of) wuxia and xianxia, that aren't so long winded even when translated. Maybe TLRs make it sound bit more comfortable for english speakers to read? anyways, it's only TLOTD that seems so long-winded.
He took some plot from Harry Potter, LOTR, King Arthur and maybe many more which i did not notice. if he follows some of those plot will Gandolf revive?
Can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder when he will go back to the island to get another power. Maybe the dragon heart this time since he will need power now.
Awesome, I love getting kept in the loop by translators. Read a few different pieces and you never get a heads up on when expecting next chapter or how long between releases. Good man 👍 Also anyone got any suggestions on other works? So far reading this and Battle Continent 1 & 2.
Am I really first is this real life?
ReplyDelete"Gandalf".... so Merlin was rejected :P
ReplyDeleteBut I guess this means that he's gonna come back stronger than ever :P
No, it isn't :P
ReplyDeleteAragorn was a tolkien fan, this is the final confirmation
ReplyDeleteAh and thx for the chapter 👍
ReplyDeleteWow, that was rather unexpected, but if this follows it's source... just have to wait and see i guess.
ReplyDeleteThanx for the chapter
Well i really hate story tale narrated this way rewind time go back change perspective this make us hard to follow i hope there is not much more chapters like this one.
ReplyDeletehow was it hard to follow lol
ReplyDeleteBravo!! *clap, clap. clap* you finished the insanely long chapter!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for the hard work!!
Change of perspective, if it was just du wei running and after he leave another chapter telling this story would be better about the dragon the magician emperor etc and even to the point where they found du wei so the next chapter would be on du wei perspective and would be much easier and would have a better flow on the story.
ReplyDeleteNext chapter Epic scene:Gandalf will say"YOU SHALL NOT PASS" while fighting Dragon chief
ReplyDeleteChap was really long number of words wise? but daaamn! why this autor most be so long-winded?!!!
ReplyDeleteno offence to TLR, anyways
Its not really the authors intention. It's actually fine when you say it in chinese but once translated, it becomes very long winded.
ReplyDeleteFly, you fools!
ReplyDeleteYou must hate Durarara...
ReplyDeletebut there is somу (plenty of) wuxia and xianxia, that aren't so long winded even when translated. Maybe TLRs make it sound bit more comfortable for english speakers to read? anyways, it's only TLOTD that seems so long-winded.
ReplyDeleteyes, i tried to read/watch but its impossible i couldn't keep it, i understand it but hated the way they make things work there..
ReplyDeletelove this project, keep it up!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks fir the chapter!
ReplyDeletePoor vivian is gonna be sad. :(
He took some plot from Harry Potter, LOTR, King Arthur and maybe many more which i did not notice.
ReplyDeleteif he follows some of those plot will Gandolf revive?
Hahaha, meh you will see soon.
ReplyDeleteMacDonald's, Pirates Of The Carribean,
ReplyDeletedid't notice King Arthur...
Arnolds king sword, only the true chosen one can pull it out.... king authur pulled a sword only the chosen one could
ReplyDeletethis is weird no chapter in almost a week.....did bcat00 die?
ReplyDeleteThis cahpter is soooooo Nice!!🔥
ReplyDeletethere wasn't a sword that had to be pulled out so far... there was only contract to let person with devil's power to take it...
ReplyDeletethere was mentioned, that ch104 is 12k words. it's four times longer than average chap here, so it's no wonder that it takes much time.
ReplyDeleteummm didnt you read the chapter, the penguin even said that the true one can only pull out the sword has nothing to do with the devil contract.....
ReplyDeleteCan't wait for the next chapter! I wonder when he will go back to the island to get another power. Maybe the dragon heart this time since he will need power now.
ReplyDeleteAhaaaa! When will the nxt chap. Be released
ReplyDeletethe first draft is nearly done, around 90%. Then i have to edit it. Should be done by tonight at the latest. I hope....
ReplyDeleteAwesome, I love getting kept in the loop by translators. Read a few different pieces and you never get a heads up on when expecting next chapter or how long between releases. Good man 👍 Also anyone got any suggestions on other works? So far reading this and Battle Continent 1 & 2.
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